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A former solider defends his fiancé from racists and accidentally kills one and faces the wrath of his older brother. (Potential sequels could follow).
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RETALIATION
Eric Dallas is a former soldier who returns home and reunites with his fiancé Alice Mendoza, during their reunion Alice is attacked by a group of racist thugs who wish to harm her, and Eric comes to her defense and accidently kills one named Gerald Holmes. Because of the circumstances no criminal charges are filed against Eric and he and Alice marry, meanwhile Gerald’s brother Breck Holmes learns of this and returns to kill Eric.
Eric and Alice find their property being invaded by racist led by Breck and attempt to kill him. Eric tells Alice to go into hiding and to contact help while he takes care of the group. Eric manages to eliminate Johnny, Hankin, Crawly and others. Meanwhile Alice contacts police and an officer named Captain Matthew Coulson reveals Breck is a member of the white nationalist and Gerald’s big brother, and wanted by the feds for years, and had been committing acts of domestic terror, murder and torture and Breck never cared about his brother, and is only attacking the Dallas family out of ego, and that the FBI is on their way to arrest him, and sent a federal warrant for his arrest and the arrest of his group.
Alice informs Eric and is found by the gang but captured but manages to escape and rejoin Eric who is backed into a corner but the cops arrive and the gang is arrested. Breck escapes and stays hidden and assumed to have escaped. Eric finds Breck holding Alice hostage and is prepared to kill them but in a distraction Alice gets away while Eric fights him and after some time manages to kill him.
The danger passed Eric and Alice celebrate the birth of their first child.
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