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A soldier gets a job at Mall of America and must fight criminals.
SYNOPSIS:
MALL OF AMERICA
Luke Ray is a former soldier who returns to his home in Minnesota and gets a job as security in the Mall of America, and although it’s stressful he does a good job, especially with the new security. After the mall begins to close a group of the guards begin taking hostages in guest and staff and are revealed to be working for criminal mastermind Emerson Flake who plans to extort money from the Black Friday Sale. Luke slips away and manages to contact help while evading the terrorist and manages to eliminate a few of the terrorists. Contacting Officer John Johnson Luke finds out more about Flake and his life of crime and had been planning this for months. Luke manages to avoid detection and learns of the hostages is his girlfriend, Rachel. After eliminating a few of the bomb's SWAT is able to get inside and provide backup meanwhile Flake finds out who Luke is, and at the same time he learns about who Luke is and finds out about Rachel and takes her hostage as he tries to escape.
Luke follows, and the SWAT takes out the remaining killers and Luke fights Flake and kills him. The money is returned; the hostages are saved and Luke and Rachel return home.
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