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EXECUTIVE PROTECTORS
By Francisco Castro
An elite close protection detail led by a resilient female executive protector accepts the job to guard a Saudi Oil Tycoon and his family who have been targeted by an unknown assassin.
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This sounds thrilling, Francisco Castro! I think it'd be better if "protector" and "protect" weren't back-to-back.
How about this: "A resilient executive protector and her elite security detail protect a Saudi Oil Tycoon and his family who have been targeted by an unknown assassin."
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