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THE BOOK OF JON: A BLADE OF SAINTS & ANGELS

THE BOOK OF JON: A BLADE OF SAINTS & ANGELS
By Leonardo Ramirez

GENRE: Action, Fantasy
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In a dystopian city, an angel-turned-human and a former special ops soldier must stop an ancient evil from replacing humanity’s bloodline with that of the Nephilim  - a hybrid race of fallen angels and human giant warriors, before humankind is lost forever.

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Genre: Action/Fantasy/Supernatural

Format: Feature

Nutshell: City of Angels meets Children of Men

In a world where angels and Nephilim coexist, a man named Jon, once an angel, now living as a human, becomes embroiled in a battle against nefarious forces led by a Nephilim, Damian Rall. With the help of his allies, including a wrongfully dishonorably discharged special ops soldier named Raphael Kane and the hacker known as “Mother Ghost” named Nora Bishop, Jon fights to stop Damian's plans to replace humanity’s bloodline with that of the Nephilim. The process includes experimentation on the homeless of Covenant City resulting in suicides and crimes committed by the same.

As Jon confronts Damian and his army of Nephilim in the Rall Foundation Tower, Raphy and his sister Naomi, trapped in the tower, make a daring escape. They are pursued by catatonic humans under Damian's influence, leading to a thrilling car chase through Covenant City.

Meanwhile, “Mother Ghost”, plays a crucial role in the unfolding events, aiding Jon and his allies from behind the scenes. The climax sees Jon facing off against Damian and his sister Douma, in a battle that pushes him to his limits and beyond.

As the dust settles and the tower collapses, Jon emerges victorious, having destroyed the source of the Nephilim’s power. The story concludes with the Kane family, reunited and celebrating the opening of the Clara Kane Home for Children, a testament to their resilience and the bonds of family.

Throughout the story, themes of sacrifice, redemption, and the power of love intertwine, creating a narrative that explores the depths of humanity and the celestial.

The pitch deck is available for viewing here: http://u.pc.cd/WYA

Maurice Vaughan

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thanks Maurice Vaughan!!

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Leonardo Ramirez. Can't wait to see this!

Asmaa Jamil

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Asmaa Jamil

This is very good Leonardo.

Bill McCormick

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thanks a ton Asmaa Jamil and Bill McCormick - means a lot coming from you folks!

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thank you Marcos Fizzotti!

Marcos Fizzotti

You're welcome, Leonardo.

Sandra Correia

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Sandra Correia

I love it!

Leonardo Ramirez

You are the best, Sandra Correia - thank you!!!

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Nathaniel Baker

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thank you so much Nathaniel Baker - means a lot!

Bobby G

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thanks so much Bobby G !!

Margret Treiber

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Leonardo Ramirez

You're the best Margret. Thank you!

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Leonardo Ramirez

Wow thanks so much @ Beridze! Very much appreciated!

Juliana Philippi

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Leonardo Ramirez

@Juliana!!! Thank you friend!!!

Richard Recco

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thank you so much @Richard Recco!

Alex Bridge

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Alex Bridge

It’s really intriguing — I’d totally watch it also as a TV series!

Leonardo Ramirez

Thanks so much Alex! I’m wondering now if I should have a TV pitch prepared for this.

John Richard Sullivan

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John Richard Sullivan

Agree with Alex -- definitely a limited series. But works as a feature too.

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Leonardo Ramirez

Thanks so much John Richard Sullivan and @Rhian Morgan for the five stars!

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Leonardo Ramirez

Wow @Dwayne Williams - Thanks a ton man!

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