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THE GREAT BIG PEANUT BUTTER MESS
By Tim Bragg
A little girl awakens to find peanut butter in her hair creating a hair-raising experience as she listens to her neighbors on how to remove the peanut butter transforming her princess like hair into a store with too many products stuck in her hair she cannot remove.
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In THE GREAT BIG PEANUT BUTTER MESS, eight-year-old LILY and her six-year-old brother DAMON’s rivalry takes a messy turn when Damon decides to sabotage Lily's perfect hair with peanut butter. Lily seeks help from three quirky neighbors, each offering unconventional peanut butter removal remedies involving jam, marshmallows, and bread. As her hair transforms into a food experiment, Lily turns the tables on Damon, concocting a surprise revenge plot of her own.
THE GREAT BIG PEANUT BUTTER MESS
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Fun title and unique concept, Tim Bragg! I think your logline could be tightened up. Something like: After her brother puts peanut butter in her princess-like hair, a little girl listens to unconventional remedies from her quirky neighbors to get it out. As her hair transforms into a food experiment, she secretly concocts a revenge plot against her brother.