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THE CASTLE BUILDER
By Tim Bragg
An eccentric businessman in the bathroom industry risks everything to protect his throne from those who plot to destroy him and steal his life’s work.
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THE CASTLE BUILDER explores the absurd life of businessman Stanley Droppings. He’s hellbent on being king of the urinals. When he discovers his business partner plans to leave their shared venture to launch a new product, Stanley takes drastic measures to eliminate the competition.
THE CASTLE BUILDER
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I remember reading your other logline for The Castle Builder, Tim Bragg. This logline is better. Unique concept. I've never seen a movie about the bathroom industry. I can tell from the logline and synopsis this is going to be funny!
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You should read it Maurice, the opening is Stanley Droppings talking about his latest bathroom products and the first line is "Is your pooper in need of a fresh scent?"
What a first line, @Tim. I got a lot on my plate right now, but looking forward to reading your script when I get caught up with things.
This is a farce and I wanted to start with something funny and keep it going through to the end, the story is silly and not meant to be anything other than entertaining.
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