Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.
A musician crippled by financial setbacks works to find the balance between supporting his mentally ill wife and pursuing his dreams of musical greatness.
SYNOPSIS:
In THE RYHTHM OF LIFE, Thomas Kennedy struggles to balance his passions and responsibilities. A typical musician, he juggles multiple gigs to provide for himself and his family. He’s barely keeping them afloat when he finds out two of his main income streams are about to dry up. To make matters worse, his wife’s declining mental health not only puts their stability at greater risk but also endangers the safety of their six-month-old. As their world unravels, Thomas must choose to sacrifice his dreams or lose the love of his life.
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
This sounds like a powerful story, Tim Bragg! It's about something a lot of people can relate to (the balance between supporting a loved one/taking care of a loved one/any kind of responsibility and chasing a dream).
I think your logline just needs an adjective for the musician (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality).
1 person likes this
Thank you Maurice, this is emotionally driven and even Dwayne Johnson would be crying at the end of this.
You're welcome, @Tim. Maybe Dwayne Johnson or another big-name actor will play a role in THE RHYTHM OF LIFE one day.
Rated this logline