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A philanderer gets a talking car, but to keep it from revealing his lecherous lifestyle, he's forced to follow its murderous instructions.
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Unique concept, Morgan Aitken! I think your logline needs a little work. After/when a womanizer gets a talking car, he’s forced to follow its murderous instructions to keep it from revealing his lustful lifestyle.
Ooooo, I like your logline, @Maurice! Brill adjectives: "lustful" and I like "womanizer." Packs more punch per character count. Thanks for that.
You're welcome, Morgan Aitken.
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Unique concept, Morgan Aitken! I think your logline needs a little work. After/when a womanizer gets a talking car, he’s forced to follow its murderous instructions to keep it from revealing his lustful lifestyle.
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Ooooo, I like your logline, @Maurice! Brill adjectives: "lustful" and I like "womanizer." Packs more punch per character count. Thanks for that.
You're welcome, Morgan Aitken.
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