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In "SIERRA LEONE," a young poet born and raised in Africa, the protagonist says that marriage is blessed but can degenerate into a disaster when a bed is soiled.
SYNOPSIS:
A story about two buddies who inhabit the past while avoiding the future..
They both engaged in dueling out of anxiety for the circumstance while
maintaining a good façade of life till one beautiful day, a friend came
over to inquire about her fiance and learned it was a troubling relationship
rather than marriage.
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Hello Wilson. Regarding your logline, I have to ask, what's the inciting incident of your story, the event that totally changes the protagonist's life? I suggest you to follow the template: 'When X (inciting incident) happens, THIS (Adjective/Profession) PERSON needs/has to Battle/Face/Overcome THIS in order to Active Verb/Goal THIS before/or else THIS occurs.'
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