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INK, STAGE, & SPICE
By DeAndre Harris II
3 old high school friends who move in together, they struggle to achieve their dream jobs, fighting life’s circumstances thrown their way.
INK, STAGE, & SPICE
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Hello DeAndre Harris II. It's a very nice concept. Here's a suggestion for the logline, to make it shorter: "When 3 old high school friends moves in together, they have to struggle to achieve their dream jobs, fighting life’s circumstances thrown their way."
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I really like that. Thank you! I’ve been using a template I found on FinalDraft’s website. This is really helpful!
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I like your logline as well, Marcos Fizzotti. Just two suggestions for DeAndre Harris II: Change "moves" to "move," and change "they have to struggle" to "they struggle to."
I would watch this show, DeAndre Harris II.
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Thank you Maurice, I saw that as I was updating my website too and changed on the fly. Thank you for the helpful suggestions. I want to get it produced at Skyway Studios in Nashville, TN. The screenplay itself has already won 3 awards in the festival circuit right now. More to come though.
You're welcome, DeAndre Harris II. Congratulations on the screenplay winning three awards! Have you worked with Skyway Studios before?
That's the name of the lot. I take classes there and have a way to speak with someone when needed.
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