GREAT idea for a film *but* 7:51 is about 4mins 51secs too long for a pitch vid. Edit's too fat, over 2mins of dead space. You gotta hit it in 90 to 120 secs. Cut it like a movie trailer: fast, thumping. dynamically grab people with the idea and feel of what house is all about. Smack and run. And get better shots of girls dancing. Jus sayin...