Short romantic film "8 days" | produced by cinema club the 4th wall | Donia Caster

Hi everyone! A couple of months ago, I posted here a script for a short film my college cinema club "The 4th Wall" and I planned to make. We were struggling with it. But in the end, we made it! And we just shared it on YouTube. It got more than 100 views in the last 24 hours! The movie, "8 DAYS", is a short romantic film about the ambiguity of feelings and the possibilities against fear. A girl notices some attention from her out-of-her-league crush during the final eight days of the scholar year. Will he make a move? Will he do something before the summer break starts? Must she do something? With the beautiful melodies of song "Lover Girl" by Laufey , we dive in the fantasy of the girl, mixed with her frustration as time passes. This is my very first short film. I can't believe it's out here! I personally don't like it and see lots of mistakes in it. But that's the usual director's opinion. Meanwhile, I would love to hear your thoughts about it, and how to improve next time!