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A captivating young heir to a hunting empire falls hard for a wildlife warrior. She’s fiery, alluring, and owner of the sanctuary he plans to convert to hunting grounds.
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Fleeing a tortured existence in Africa under his sadistic father’s rule, our hero – the heir to a big game hunting empire - leaves it all behind and lands in Australia seeking a fresh start. Enticed by his best childhood mate, he’s convinced to invest in a struggling wildlife sanctuary with the dream of converting the land into a Naturalist Bow-Hunting Lodge. Unknown to him, the sanctuary owner – his best mate’s partner – has no intention of selling the land and is an off the chart’s wildlife advocate. From the instant they meet, they are inexplicably drawn to each other and can’t deny their soul attraction. Meeting his match and falling hard for the fiery conservationist he realizes his dilemma, sees their boyhood dreams shattered, is forced into a family battle, and life altering choices. Meanwhile, his mate’s resentment and addictions worsen sending him spiraling into the arms of our hero’s vengeful father. All hell breaks loose, and secrets are exposed, as Kenya collides with Western Australia in a final battle. Can love survive, and who will be left standing?
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I'd watch this, Dia Warinn! It reminds me of movies like “Water for Elephants,” “Coming to America,” and “Crocodile Dundee.”
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Hello All! Thanks for feedback. Appreciate it.
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You're welcome, Dia.
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Maurice - also a special thanks for suggestion. Still working on it and this helps.
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You're welcome, Dia Warinn. Glad it helps.