THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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THE LAST STOP
By Joseph Waldygo
A female, ex-military squad uses stealth tactics and high-tech gadgets to steal cash from a dangerous cartel drug gang to save a veteran's community with aging, wounded warriors from foreclosure.
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Sounds unique and exciting, Joseph Waldygo! Solid logline, but you put "cartel," so I don't think you need "drug gang." I'm sure the reader will know you mean a drug cartel.
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